IMO (as not an expert), I think it would be hard for anyone to tell much about the focus remotely. With that said, I feel positive about this without a photo engraved, or a straight line results from the ramp test. (Still not an expert) With that said, I would do the ramp test, jumping right into cutting without knowing if your focused, to me is jumping in the deep end without knowing if you can swim or not.
Looking at neje’s wiki, it seems that lens screwed in all the way, is a long focus, and out is a short focus. Their documentation and YouTube video on their wiki shows them setting up for high density MDF, I’m assuming less than 20mm per their documentation, distance of the brass lens 2.5 mm from the case to the knurling, bottom of the aluminum 5mm from the material, 300mm/min, 80% power, 2 passes, resulting in a clean cut. They are on a honeycomb bed, with air assist. By the hiss sound, I’m assuming compressor not pump. At least my pumps don’t hiss like that (ones on actual fish tanks). The hole their air is coming out of, is very small, so…
The focus you are looking for, is the equivalent of playing with a magnifying glass and sunlight. Hopefully you were able to experience this at a younger age. Glass too far away, light beam was wide and out of focus, to close same result, but within a sweet spot area, the light spot, was bright, round, and caused things to smoke, or burn. Of course we also had to account for the angle between the sun, and the object we were trying to make hot, and make sure the lens was parallel to both source and target.
Same thing here, however you don’t need to adjust the lens all the time, once you know your focal distance for z. And you shouldn’t have to worry about the angle assuming neje did things right.
The ramp test, creates a straight line, with a variable z, where depending on the angle you setup, could start from not burning anything, to burning a wide line, that gets narrow and focused, and then out of focus, and wide again. Aka, the material is on a angle, I would set it up, assuming you do the settings they used, where the material will be 10mm from the bottom to 0mm, and burn a line on the piece of wood. You might be able to add some speed, being we aren’t trying to cut, but mark a line. Fast enough to make a mark, slow enough for it to have some color.
My only problem with the ramp test is, it can be a bit of a challenge figuring out the measurement where the line is the thinnest, and most focused. At least it was in my setup. Which is why David’s in my opinion is more “scientific”, once you know what you’re looking for. But if you’re new…. How do you know what to look for. David’s method you’re looking for the laser “dot” to be the smallest with the cleanest/clearest defined sides. FYI, diode lasers beams are more of a square that a circle.
Does that help?