I’ve read the whole thing a few times, and I think it is great. Very good quality for an addition to the doc and it lays out everything pretty well
I opened a pull request here: https://github.com/V1EngineeringInc/V1EngineeringInc-Docs/pull/221. We can have discussions there about it. Or, I also opened a forum post here: Milling Metals Documentation
I am going to put my first thoughts in the PR, but if you would prefer the forums, we can talk there.